Hi Keira, I'm Victoria from LS2. I really enjoyed reading this made-up narrative - my favorite part about it was the ending, that makes the viewers think, like a cliff-hanger. The descriptive language really helps me picture the image you used. I wonder what happened to the Mom, how she was feeling, if she ever made it out. Did you use any inspiration or help other than the image you used to base the narrative on? Great work!
Hi again Keira! That's really impressive you're a very strong writer at narratives - It would make sense to think that the aggressive water could've pushed the Mom away and then was found later. Thanks for reply -
That's a good question, though I've never been aboard sea at all, so staying on an Island has never really been a thought of mind. But I think fish island can get pretty disastrous like this story describes and harder to avoid/prevent affecting the buildings and land. Thanks for taking the time to have this learning conversation!
Hi Keira, I'm Victoria from LS2. I really enjoyed reading this made-up narrative - my favorite part about it was the ending, that makes the viewers think, like a cliff-hanger. The descriptive language really helps me picture the image you used. I wonder what happened to the Mom, how she was feeling, if she ever made it out. Did you use any inspiration or help other than the image you used to base the narrative on? Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Victoria. Thank you. No I didn't have any inspiration or help other from the image. What do you think happened to the mum.
DeleteHi again Keira! That's really impressive you're a very strong writer
Deleteat narratives - It would make sense to think that the aggressive water could've pushed the Mom away and then was found later. Thanks for reply -
Thanks Victoria. I really appreciate the feedback. I like your logical thinking. Would you ever go to fish Island?
DeleteThat's a good question, though I've never been aboard sea at all, so staying on an Island has never really been a thought of mind. But I think fish island can get pretty disastrous like this story describes and harder to avoid/prevent affecting the buildings and land. Thanks for taking the time to have this learning conversation!
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